Ask for feedback when, or before, you update your profile.
Once you've written a new draft of your profile, try asking someone who does not really know your “business persona” to assess it. Perhaps a family member — or ask a connection on LinkedIn to help by emailing your draft to them.
Yes, (s)he has written it that way
No, I write as myself
The objective feedback they give will help you to improve your profile, and you will also pick up on areas where you have not explained things clearly. They also may spot some spelling errors or grammar mistakes.
Other people, if asked to give an honest assessment, will quickly spot gaps and pick up on unclear, clichéd or redundant phrases. They will spot when you are clearly faking it, using jargon, or simply not making sense.
I'll give you a free 10-minute assessment of your profile's strengths and weaknesses, along with some advice and solutions from my 18 years of experience writing profiles on LinkedIn. Just book a free call to suit your diary.
Get someone whose judgement you value to check over things for you on your #LinkedIn Profile, because if it does not make sense to them at one reading, it needs more work.
